This is a drawing made by Andrew and Lyric and Matthew we made this for a character that we had to make for a story that our class is making and we are half way done so yeah ok blog you guys later.
Hi there Lyric, My name is Abby and I am a year six at Yaldhurst Model School, YMS for short.
Twisty looks so cool and has some really cool colors and and the background looks so cool I really like it, also how did you make it?
Next time you could put the likes and dislikes in different boxes and make them different colors to make it have even more color.
Did you realize that you don't have a full stop at the end of the writing. Also I saw that at the first part of the writing it was Twisty talking saying his name then the rest of it was you talking not Twisty.
Hey Lyric, Shabeera here from Waikowhai Primary School! I really like your blog post about your fiction character Twisty drawing. It reminded me of when we had to make a character for writing. Maybe next time you could add more detail and add a reflection saying if it was hard or not. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsshabeeraa.blogspot.com/ Be sure to check it out! Blog you later!
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Hi there Lyric, My name is Abby and I am a year six at Yaldhurst Model School, YMS for short.
ReplyDeleteTwisty looks so cool and has some really cool colors and and the background looks so cool I really like it, also how did you make it?
Next time you could put the likes and dislikes in different boxes and make them different colors to make it have even more color.
Did you realize that you don't have a full stop at the end of the writing. Also I saw that at the first part of the writing it was Twisty talking saying his name then the rest of it was you talking not Twisty.
Kind Regards,
Abby
Hello Abby thanks for the reply I will fixs some things up and we made Twisty on a google drawing with some free lines
DeleteHey Lyric,
ReplyDeleteShabeera here from Waikowhai Primary School! I really like your blog post about your fiction character Twisty drawing. It reminded me of when we had to make a character for writing. Maybe next time you could add more detail and add a reflection saying if it was hard or not. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsshabeeraa.blogspot.com/
Be sure to check it out!
Blog you later!