Hi Lyric My name is Dazharn from Waikowhai primary school. I like how used some thunder bolts and stars because it makes your all about me shine. The on thing you could change is your righting because your writing is really small and it is really close to your picture and its hard to read. I remember when I made my all about me and I did the same but I changed it. blog you later please come check my blog at http://wpsdazharnr.blogspot.co.nz.
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u look funny m8
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ReplyDeleteHi Lyric My name is Dazharn from Waikowhai primary school. I like how used some thunder bolts and stars because it makes your all about me shine. The on thing you could change is your righting because your writing is really small and it is really close to your picture and its hard to read. I remember when I made my all about me and I did the same but I changed it. blog you later please come check my blog at http://wpsdazharnr.blogspot.co.nz.
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